Analysis of Insomnia



Who calls my name above the whispered wind song
and rustles yellow leaves near my window
while the weeping willow sways beneath a winter moon?
Mournful ghosts of forgotten dreams drift
unbeckoned through my mind, spreading ashes,
and taunting me
with hints of thyme and heather.
Beyond my darkened window lies a blanket of new snow
upon the earth and in the arms of naked trees,
like a virgin’s robe, leaving no hint of what’s beneath.
Still sleep evades me and in its place a cast of shadows
dance a silent ritual upon my bedroom wall
and my thoughts ramble down a thousand paths
 this sleepless night.
Gently swooping down on the dark wings of fancy
the night wind eases through the trees saying whooo.
I wish I knew.  I wish I knew.


Scheme ABCDEFGBHIJKLMFNO
Poetic Form
Metre 11110101011 011011110 101011010101 101101011 11111010 0101 1111010 01110101010111 010100011101 1010110111001 1101100110111 101010001111 0111010101 1101 101011011110 01110101101 11111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 725
Words 133
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 588
Words per stanza (avg) 134
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Submitted by Snodeel on June 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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