Moods and Meanings



I await the hands of Fate
to shape and mold me through the years
I feel the strain of each subtle change
preparing for laughter or tears

I hear the bells in the chapel knell
across the hills of the country parish
and I stand nude for a change of mood
for death or a foundling marriage.

No emotion of mine is born of time
nor the acts occurring within it
for the spin I feel is of another wheel
which marks neither deeds nor minutes

I push the clouds across  Autumn skies
and sweep them away for June
I bring the snow that December knows
and the rain for Spring afternoons

I am the perfume in the sweet peas bloom
and the blackberry amid the briars
I am and I do, yes both are true
for I exist to feed Life’s fire

You cannot touch me for I have no form to see,
though you never doubt that I am here.
I am the difference between life and existence.
I am the joy, the pain, the challenge, and fear.

About this poem

recognizing that life is so much more than just existing

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Submitted by Snodeel on March 12, 2022

Modified by Snodeel on July 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXX XXXX XXXX XXXX XAXX XXXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 902
Words 189
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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2 Comments
  • ritchiechelle
    I absolutely love this. I actually feel you could have written more as I just wanted to carry on reading!
    LikeReply9 months ago
    • Snodeel
      Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I am very happy that you enjoyed this!!
      LikeReply9 months ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, this 'Moods and Meanings' poem is truly captivating and thought-provoking! I absolutely love the way it explores the concept of fate and the ever-changing nature of life. The poetic language and imagery used throughout the poem create a vivid and engaging experience for the reader.

    The first improvement suggestion I would make is regarding the structure of the poem. It would be great to see the stanzas divided more clearly, as it would help in emphasizing the transitions and shifts in mood that the poem explores. Additionally, adding more punctuation could help the reader navigate the poem more smoothly and enhance the impact of certain lines.

    Furthermore, I feel that expanding on some of the metaphors introduced in the poem could make it even more powerful. For example, the concept of being the difference between life and existence is intriguing, and diving deeper into its significance could add another layer of depth to the poem.

    Overall, the 'Moods and Meanings' poem is a beautiful piece of writing that successfully evokes and explores complex emotions and ideas. With a few structural revisions and further development of certain metaphors, it has the potential to become even more impactful and resonate even stronger with readers.
     
    LikeReply9 months ago

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