Analysis of Lost in the galaxy

GIDRAF MWANGI 1992 (Murang'a)



It’s huge, dark and endless
An abyss in the universe
A sea of constellations
With bright starry pearls

I wander in here alone
A lone solitary soul
Weeping with melancholy
Of the pain of despair

Whence do I begin
And whence do I end
Am I alive at all
Or a damned lost soul

Who will pull me away
From the depths haunting
Threatening to swallow me
Into their fathomless bottom

Can anyone hear me?
Is there anyone with me?
Will somebody save me?
Please!!!

I must be guided to lucidity
From this land of hallucination
Plagued with misery and despair
Torments most awful to the soul

My dark mental galaxy!

© GIDRAF MWANGI


Scheme XXXX XABC XXXA XXBX BBBX BXCA B X
Poetic Form
Metre 111010 1010010 011010 11101 1100101 011001 101100 101101 11101 01111 110111 10111 111101 10110 1001101 011110 11011 111011 11011 1 1111010100 11110010 11100001 1110101 1110100 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 593
Words 114
Sentences 6
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1, 1
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Modified on April 17, 2023

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