nfowke
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melody for verse

Melody for the verse:

The melody for the verse:

The melody to the chorus:

As ever you are very kind. I am wondering how I can send you the melody. Perhaps I will just send you the 'life story' instead!

Thank you! Appreciated

Yes too many suffer from the disabling fallout of this horribe affliction ... but I am living proof that it is possible to be free. See my post ... 'Silence The Accuser'

I meant to comment when you first posted this, as ever wonderfully written and evocative. The theme of your poem and your finally line 'They cannot quench my song' has promted me to post the words of a song that I wrote called 'Silence The Accuser'. I wrote this as a testomony, of being completely healed of depression. See my page for more. more »

Powerful, thought provoking, thank you.

A very moving and vivid depiction of post war conflicts.

Very clever!

The profound simplicity of this piece spoke to me .

I really liked the depth and imagery of this piece

A beautifully written poem that carried my imagination along with it's easy flow.

Family legend tells the tale of my 'Huguenot' ancestors fleeing persecution in France in C16. Sadly 'murderous antipathy ' is still casting long dark shadows across the centuries.
I loved your depiction of the moon in the first stanza ... wonderful imagery. more »