PTSD - The Soldier and the Bottle



Sands of time have brought us down
For blood we’ve spilled upon the ground
Promises were given and lies were told
Was the bill of goods that we were sold

They pin their medals and offer us pride
But the ones who lived are the ones who died
Brothers fell wayside soul by soul
But it was the living who paid the toll

We fought their battles and gave our lives
Returning home broken to children and wives
Limbs and bodies left dead on the field
Their corpses were used as human shield

We gave and we left the families we had
Our scars returned us broken and sad
Now we find ourselves lost in a bottle of gin
Fighting a new war as a battle of sin

We stood strong and proud until bodies fell
Where bombs blew open our living hell
Tearing our lives apart one and all
For it was our spirits that took the fall

The killing has stolen our will to live
For acts we’ve committed we cannot forgive
So please bear with us for who we are not
Now the bullets we dodge are a whiskey shot

About this poem

For those who suffer the rigors of war.

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Written on May 02, 2023

Submitted by Symmetry60 on May 02, 2023

Modified by Symmetry60 on November 27, 2023

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Scheme XXAA BBCC XXDD EEFF GGHH XXII
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 998
Words 215
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Steven Dupere

With a book of poetry to boast, Waltz of Semantic Tongues, Steven has been challenging nervous canvases for more time than time can shake an eon at. This is a shard of that fallout. more…

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  • nfowke
    A very moving and vivid depiction of post war conflicts.
    LikeReply 14 months ago

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