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There are times that I just want to lay back , lay back upon the grass, in the dead of night, and just feel the sommer rains upon my face.

  July 2022     1 month ago

Submitted Poems 10 total

The Debutante (revised version)

1. Life without friends
is empty and bleak.
like the pit of quicksand
That they all gather 'round
sitting,

staring,


  ...watching me sink.

Not a cry,


  Nor a yelp

  ...

by Sommer Rains

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~This~

Its my birthday today
I sit in a dark room
I can’t see the light
at the end of this tunnel

All are gone
All have left
The ones I’ve loved
each one,
Now gone

I used to believe
Love was good
But all it was,
Was the knife
...

by Sommer Rains

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added 10 months ago
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The Debutante

The Debutante

Life without friends
is empty and bleak.
like the pit of quicksand
That they all gather round
sitting,

staring,


  ...watching me sink.

Not a cry,

  nor a yelp
seem able,
...

by Sommer Rains

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added 10 months ago
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Like the Girls in School

1. The Daze
Do you remember when
We used to hold hands
And how you’d say things just to drag me down
Why did you want
So badly in your heart
To break me up
And tear me in two
I’m in a daze now...

by Sommer Rains

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added 1 year ago
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I Don’t Deserve Your Love

Each day…
I wish

  I could Be….somebody else

 


  This.

  loneli-

  ness…. Has entrapped me

And the dawn broke

  It broke

  ...

by Sommer Rains

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added 1 year ago
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its all good, thank you for the comment.

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yes I know exactly what you mean. I like that this is so short but so full of impact and meaning.

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Thank you so much :)

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yes i can relate

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