Nathaniel40's comments

Here's the list of comments submitted by Nathaniel40 — There are currently 23 comments total.

	I just kept seeing myself. Imagining the rain pouring on my bed as I try to sleep. But it's always there to remind me, half breathing. 9 months ago	View
	I liked how you talked about love coming in little sips. Keep up the writing bro 10 months ago	View
	Great flow and use of words. Kept me wanting to read more. Keep this up. I'm going to check out your other work as well. 10 months ago	View
	is it. so constructive..... 10 months ago	View
	interesting 11 months ago	View
	Made me smile. Thanks lol 11 months ago	View
	Chasing pennies and dimes till we die 1 year ago	View
	I've shared this with a few people brother. Not trying to be kiss ass or anything. But this has been the best one I've read from other amateur writers on here so far 1 year ago	View
	"After the persona of my life has turned to ashes and dust and I have departed this plane gaze into the expansive sky sensing the swiling of the winds and listen to me whisper inspiration through the soothing flow of the evening breeze" Damn. Best line more » 1 year ago	View
	I was sitting. Reading this out loud to myself. Still taken back by the analogies you use. Brother. This would be a good poem to use to start things out. I have several favorite lines from this one. And if I'm honest, you've inspired me to write something tonight. One of the best ones I've read so far. more » 1 year ago	View
	I should have been a better medic. 1 year ago	View
	I wish i could have saved them :( 1 year ago	View
	Thanks Mark. I appreciate your feedback. It means a lot to me. More than you know brother. Im serious 1 year ago	View
	ashes to ashes. dust to dust. we always return to the earth as ash and dust. I'd rather be in the sky like you. I like this brother. I hope to be in the sky when I die as well. 1 year ago	View
	I know what you mean brother. Lots of things in my life that make it this way honestly. I hope you get a chance to read my new one brother. Would appreciate your opinion. 1 year ago	View
	Romantic. And I'm hopeful you'll get an answer soon. I like the structure that you used for this one as well. 1 year ago	View
	It's the way you describe things that makes your work captivating. I'm telling you, the details that you build with the words you use shows your talent. Hell yeah. 1 year ago	View
	Thanks Mark. Means a lot to hear that. I have one I'm going to be submitting today I think you will like. Maybe you could tell me what you think when you see it? 1 year ago	View
	Thats cool though. I enjoyed reading it and following the story. It made me want to read your other work. I just like your style. It's different and kept me interested. Keep up the good work brother. 1 year ago	View
	"As the sun laughs at the Gods And throw down its diamond wings" The last two lines just as good. WOW. The words used in this poem is beautiful. I have read it three times. I like it more than each time before. Thank you for sharing more » 1 year ago	View
	These stories and the way you present them...keep you reading. Please review some of my work. I'm enjoying yours so far. 1 year ago	View
	Intersting...real memory? 1 year ago	View
	I liked it. The first two lines entice you to keep reading. I also liked how you structured it. Even though not in the standard poetic form, it flows nicely. 1 year ago	View