RhymingVibes's comments

So true. I strongly feel coming times would slowly narrow down that divide and gap between rich and poor.

Thanks for taking the pain of going through this poem. Your views and endorsement mean a lot. And hopefully things will change for better.

Thanks for reading and sharing your views. Much appreciated.

It’s commendable that you chose to write on this. Apt and honest. Thanks for this contribution to world of literature. I am sure you would go on to complete all those tasks and more that require 100 years of time. Warm regards. more »

So true. All it takes is changing or perspective and being positive.

Thanks for reading and sharing your views. Hopefully things will change for better.

Got it. Thanks for the nice words.

Poems like this one don’t only ignite your sensitivities, but also into inspire you write effectively and with intensity

No other poem has evoked such intense and profound emotions. Must have read it a dozen times, and everyone could feel the pain it meant to convey. Speechless.

This poem is a reminder of the profound fact that Intense emotions when expressed in simple words far outweigh the complex words used for simple emotions. It’s all about intent and intensity. Superb.

Could feel every word, the feelings hidden in and between the lines. Inspirational writing.

So smooth, honest, and most importantly, realistic. Is the epitome of simplicity.

I guess every aspiring poet can relate to it. Free spirit; Simplicity at its envious best.

Couldn’t have been a better poem to raise awareness on this profound subject.

Amazing use of words to sensitise, visualise and realise the emotions that the poet wants to express. Hats off...

Beautiful poem, one could feel Walking through this poem. Sorry, it was the first time i was voting, so accidentally it registered 3 stars, meant to give 5 stars.

I entered a poem Yesterday for July competition. But it’s not showing in the submitted poems section on profile page. Was wondering if i could edit it now.
Kindly guide.