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Comforting God

TommyD 1957 (Ft. Lee)

Comforting God

When dilemmas arise , in the life that I live
I look to the heaven's , and know I should give ...

The sorrows I feel , as I now walk the earth
That were given to me , since inception of birth

To the Creator of man , and the gifts that are found
I will lift up my Spirit , and the troubles around ...

And find consolation , from the God that I serve
And hope for the hope , that I do not deserve

He will give me the peace , if I only accept
That His Son was the one , who took my neglect ...

And bore it with Him , while committing His life
To my soul that forever , is relieved of the strife

TommyD 3/29/21
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Submitted by TommyD on March 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XX AA BB CC XX DD
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 611
Words 121
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
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