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Shattered heart

clifton redmond

As night falls alone i reminess
The thoughts of my loss fresh in my mind
Wondering through an empty valley
Of frightened mournful tears
As my broken fragile porcelain heart starts pounding
The rush, the fear, is she really gone
As morning nears my night will ever last
Alone i stand despair consumes internally
The acid rain will fall forever on my shattered heart

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Submitted on October 15, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCADEFCG
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 356
Words 64
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
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