Analysis of Shattered heart



As night falls alone i reminess
The thoughts of my loss fresh in my mind
Wondering through an empty valley
Of frightened mournful tears
As my broken fragile porcelain heart starts pounding
The rush, the fear, is she really gone
As morning nears my night will ever last
Alone i stand despair consumes internally
The acid rain will fall forever on my shattered heart


Scheme ABCADEFCG
Poetic Form Nonet (33%)
Metre 1110111 011111011 100111010 110101 1110101001110 010111101 1101111101 011101010100 01011101011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 356
Words 64
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 299
Words per stanza (avg) 64
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Submitted on October 15, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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clifton redmond

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