My evening walk



When I was walking in the evening
I noticed how a dark,
velvet blanket has covered over the mountains
leaving a limb id,
dark blue border to the sky
I continued to walk and
discovered that one star is following me
I remain in force of light for a while
and looked at the star wondering
if it is determining my destiny
The star was only climmering in the sky
and sending light to my way
I started to walk again and understood
Only I have the responsibility of my life
and the star only gives light to my way
Op our of Jasmine dazed me
and I took two prickles with me
After all I realized
that this is what I wanted so much
to sense and live.
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGHAGEIJKIGGLMN
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 621
Words 129
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

Rita Hannele Hawi

First book published 2001-Conversations with Shulamit Winner with a poem Deep Emotions-September 2008 Today's Woman Winner December 2008 with a poem The real Message of Christmas Today's Woman more…

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