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Unique piece

Rita Hannele Hawi



Your deep eyes are watching
me gently
and I notice it.

Your words are fulfilling
me gently
and I notice it.

Your lips are touching
me gently
and I feel them

We are like Mars and Venus
fire burning inside us
like melted gold

Reaching to the sun
and running to the Apollo
The melted gold came
one unique piece

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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme aBC aBC aBx ddx xxxx
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 292
Words 60
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 4
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Rita Hannele Hawi

First book published 2001-Conversations with Shulamit Winner with a poem Deep Emotions-September 2008 Today's Woman Winner December 2008 with a poem The real Message of Christmas Today's Woman more…

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