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Kamenee

Kumar Kamal

Kamenee,kamenee,kamenee please come
Please,please,please kamenee please do come
Kamenee why don`t you come?!
I came,I came,I came so many evenings
So many suns in You being moon-ridden,sunburn
Kamenee please come,kamenee please come--
Churches churn;Temples twist,turn
Love pagoda pierces open Heaven`s Hub
Kamenee please come
Your eyes are stoned;Your Hearts numb
Your soft,sweet,swollen,sylvan still-yet-
untouched breasts fall and rise like the
waves of the virgin Ocean caught in stormy
surprise
Your lips quaVer;Your nipples peachy,ripe
Oh sweetest arti I cannot ride,I cannot
write You in moonlit-night---
You torture me,You tempt me,you blind me
outright riding me complete,unbound,unties
Oh the sea-men fly in Your Watery Isle---
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AAABCACDAAEFGHIJKGBL
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 718
Words 125
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
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