Analysis of Kamenee



Kamenee,kamenee,kamenee please come
Please,please,please kamenee please do come
Kamenee why don`t you come?!
I came,I came,I came so many evenings
So many suns in You being moon-ridden,sunburn
Kamenee please come,kamenee please come--
Churches churn;Temples twist,turn
Love pagoda pierces open Heaven`s Hub
Kamenee please come
Your eyes are stoned;Your Hearts numb
Your soft,sweet,swollen,sylvan still-yet-
untouched breasts fall and rise like the
waves of the virgin Ocean caught in stormy
surprise
Your lips quaVer;Your nipples peachy,ripe
Oh sweetest arti I cannot ride,I cannot
write You in moonlit-night---
You torture me,You tempt me,you blind me
outright riding me complete,unbound,unties
Oh the sea-men fly in Your Watery Isle---


Scheme AAABCACDAAEFGHIJKGBL
Poetic Form
Metre 111 11111 11111 111111010 1101011011 11111 1011 101011011 111 111111 1111 01110110 11010101010 01 111101 1101110110 11011 11011111 111011 10111011001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 718
Words 125
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 598
Words per stanza (avg) 104
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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