Rate this poem:0.0 / 0 votes

Hope to invent a mind controlling remote control

Hope to invent a mind controlling remote control

Hope to invent a mind controlling remote control
From that; all nerves of my mind; I can control
By doing that can be a man of my own emotion
Because of it; anytime I can't go out of control

Saw a marvel; an artificial hand in chip's control
The chip they introduce artificial hand to control
When saw; my emotions was; unable to control
Exactly same; wan to introduce a remote control

I'm in thoughts thinking; how to start as a whole
But as a beginner; I have to strive for mental mall
Think it is impossible task to bring it under control
Now I am thinking what to do next to be in control

Query is how to do; to whom to turn for advice sole
Know nothing; when achieved; will be a super bowl
In contemplation for my ideas red a carpet to unroll
Surfing in domain of my mind; a solution to unfold

Still at initial stages of my novice search of my soul
I'll continue my research; until I kick a winning goal
When it done; begin a new era; my mind to control
Not worried; walking towards my destiny; and goal
Font size:
Collection  PDF     

Submitted on June 04, 2012

1:02 min read

Quick analysis:

Scheme A Aaxa aaaa axaa aaax aaaa
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,037
Words 204
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Discuss this Amir Samji poem with the community:



    Find a translation for this poem in other languages:

    Select another language:

    • - Select -
    • 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
    • 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
    • Español (Spanish)
    • Esperanto (Esperanto)
    • 日本語 (Japanese)
    • Português (Portuguese)
    • Deutsch (German)
    • العربية (Arabic)
    • Français (French)
    • Русский (Russian)
    • ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
    • 한국어 (Korean)
    • עברית (Hebrew)
    • Gaeilge (Irish)
    • Українська (Ukrainian)
    • اردو (Urdu)
    • Magyar (Hungarian)
    • मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
    • Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Italiano (Italian)
    • தமிழ் (Tamil)
    • Türkçe (Turkish)
    • తెలుగు (Telugu)
    • ภาษาไทย (Thai)
    • Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
    • Čeština (Czech)
    • Polski (Polish)
    • Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Românește (Romanian)
    • Nederlands (Dutch)
    • Ελληνικά (Greek)
    • Latinum (Latin)
    • Svenska (Swedish)
    • Dansk (Danish)
    • Suomi (Finnish)
    • فارسی (Persian)
    • ייִדיש (Yiddish)
    • հայերեն (Armenian)
    • Norsk (Norwegian)
    • English (English)


    Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:


    "Hope to invent a mind controlling remote control" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2023. Web. 22 Mar. 2023. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/73727/hope-to-invent-a-mind-controlling-remote-control>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    March 2023

    Poetry Contest

    Enter our monthly contest for the chance to win cash prizes and gain recognition for your talent.

    Browse Poetry.com


    Are you a poetry master?

    Roald Dahl wrote: "The animal I really dig, above all others is the..."
    • A. horse
    • B. pig
    • C. cat
    • D. dog