Analysis of Hope to invent a mind controlling remote control



Hope to invent a mind controlling remote control

Hope to invent a mind controlling remote control
From that; all nerves of my mind; I can control
By doing that can be a man of my own emotion
Because of it; anytime I can't go out of control

Saw a marvel; an artificial hand in chip's control
The chip they introduce artificial hand to control
When saw; my emotions was; unable to control
Exactly same; wan to introduce a remote control

I'm in thoughts thinking; how to start as a whole
But as a beginner; I have to strive for mental mall
Think it is impossible task to bring it under control
Now I am thinking what to do next to be in control

Query is how to do; to whom to turn for advice sole
Know nothing; when achieved; will be a super bowl
In contemplation for my ideas red a carpet to unroll
Surfing in domain of my mind; a solution to unfold

Still at initial stages of my novice search of my soul
I'll continue my research; until I kick a winning goal
When it done; begin a new era; my mind to control
Not worried; walking towards my destiny; and goal


Scheme A Aaxa aaaa axaa aaax aaaa
Poetic Form
Metre 1101010100101 1101010100101 11111111101 11011101111010 0111101111101 1010101010101 011010101101 1110101010101 0101110100101 10110111101 11001011111101 111010011111001 11110111111001 10111111111011 110101110101 001011010101011 100011110010101 110101011101111 101010101110101 11101011011101 1101001110001
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,037
Words 204
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 139
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on June 04, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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