Analysis of Hope to invent a mind controlling remote control
Hope to invent a mind controlling remote control
Hope to invent a mind controlling remote control
From that; all nerves of my mind; I can control
By doing that can be a man of my own emotion
Because of it; anytime I can't go out of control
Saw a marvel; an artificial hand in chip's control
The chip they introduce artificial hand to control
When saw; my emotions was; unable to control
Exactly same; wan to introduce a remote control
I'm in thoughts thinking; how to start as a whole
But as a beginner; I have to strive for mental mall
Think it is impossible task to bring it under control
Now I am thinking what to do next to be in control
Query is how to do; to whom to turn for advice sole
Know nothing; when achieved; will be a super bowl
In contemplation for my ideas red a carpet to unroll
Surfing in domain of my mind; a solution to unfold
Still at initial stages of my novice search of my soul
I'll continue my research; until I kick a winning goal
When it done; begin a new era; my mind to control
Not worried; walking towards my destiny; and goal
Scheme | A Aaxa aaaa axaa aaax aaaa |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1101010100101 1101010100101 11111111101 11011101111010 0111101111101 1010101010101 011010101101 1110101010101 0101110100101 10110111101 11001011111101 111010011111001 11110111111001 10111111111011 110101110101 001011010101011 100011110010101 110101011101111 101010101110101 11101011011101 1101001110001 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,037 |
Words | 204 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 21 |
Letters per line (avg) | 40 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 139 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 34 |
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Submitted on June 04, 2012
Modified on March 05, 2023
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