Deep connection



When you feel tired
Nothing makes you smile
When you want to shout
And let your pain out
Stay strong and remember
Life can be rough sometimes
But as strong as we are together
Nothing can break us apart
Look deep inside your heart
Feel the waves of love
Making a storm of water
Everything moves faster
Don't stay back; be ahead
Don't let anyone control your head
Be yourself in every clocks tick
Don't go after the crowd, that's weak
Stay focused and do your best
That's the only way to pass any test
Be thoughtful and take advice
It doesn't cost any price
Whatever you do - don't forget
What we have will never melt
It'll stay as strong as a rock
And go through every nature's block
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Submitted on May 09, 2015

Modified on March 25, 2023

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Shir Hanochi

"life isn't measured by the numbers of breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away". With my poetry, I want to make more of those breathtaking moments, to put everything I feel into words and let everyone else enjoy it as well as learning from it.English is not my first language, therefore I'd like to hear any grammar or spelling mistakes. Thank you all for understanding, and enjoy reading. :) more…

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