Losing My Soul
Cassie McCauley 1977 (UT)
Slender beams of illumination enter
this darkened cavern as I kneel,
always sorrowful, always despairing.
Frozen here, waiting
accusing robed forms wrought
in blackened stone loom,
As dust dances in the air,
forming an image in my mind,
infiltrating my exposed soul.
Embracing the unknown,
accepting a lonely fate,
as bloody tears begin to fall.
Realization dawns on a lover's face.
I raise my head, now caressing
this oblivious immortal darkness.
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Submitted by cassie_m on January 31, 2021
Modified on March 23, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 433 |
Words | 71 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 3, 3 |
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