Losing My Soul



Slender beams of illumination enter
this darkened cavern as I kneel,
always sorrowful, always despairing.

Frozen here, waiting
accusing robed forms wrought
in blackened stone loom,

As dust dances in the air,
forming an image in my mind,
infiltrating my exposed soul.

Embracing the unknown,
accepting a lonely fate,
as bloody tears begin to fall.

Realization dawns on a lover's face.
I raise my head, now caressing
this oblivious immortal darkness.
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Submitted by cassie_m on January 31, 2021

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXA AXX XXX XXX XAX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 433
Words 71
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3

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