I watched you give up on me Dad
Candice Sapp 1982 (Morgantown West Virginia)
I watched you give up on me,
Like a sinking ship lost in the sea,
You turned your back and walked away,
Leaving my heart, forgetting my name.
I tried to hold on with all my might,
But you were already out of sight,
Didn't you love me Dad? Was it all a lie?
I screamed Dad, Don't Leave.
I hoped you would come back to play,
To spend time with me,
You never came back, I didn't know what to say,
You were gone, it felt like forever,
I sank in a dark place,
Consumed in despair,
Asking myself, why did you leave and not even care?
I tried to move on, find something to get into.
But the pain of your absence, it was all I know.
I watched you give up on me.
As I slowly faded out of your life.
You have a beautiful baby girl, why can't you see.
I will always have your eyes of blue,
Why didn't you love me, like I loved you.
You left me at the age of three,
You just threw away the key.
About this poem
This poem is about my dad abandoning me at the age of 3 and never came back.
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Written on May 21, 2024
Submitted on May 21, 2024
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 882 |
Words | 208 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 24 |
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