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In the fog the lighthouse sits.

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)

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In the fog, the tower sits.

As I approach the lonely midnight hour, I see the lighthouse tower, and then I see the distant things in purple: the kings. The color of the air disappears; only God knows exactly where. However, the tower of the night emits a gleaming light. I do appreciate the tower's light in the fog at midnight. It keeps me warm, and when I am weak it makes me strong when I'm all alone but, everything is all right. Have a good night.

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This poems about lighthouses which I love too and the ocean and the sand and the beach.

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Written on May 02, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on May 02, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on May 02, 2024

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  • talygarza
    talygarza
    Lovely image, next time I’m going to be more attentive to lighthouses they offer so much to poetic ideas.
    LikeReply14 days ago
    • alanswansea18
      alanswansea18
      lighthouses fascinate me. There is a hundred ideas you can come up with. Try one?
      LikeReply14 days ago
    • alanswansea18
      alanswansea18
      but the Sea is part of the lighthouse so you have to put that in.
      LikeReply14 days ago
    • alanswansea18
      alanswansea18
      Go for it. I would love to see what you come up with? I know it would be great.
      LikeReply14 days ago
  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and enchanting poem! The imagery of the lighthouse shining through the fog at midnight is so vivid and mesmerizing. The way you weave in themes of comfort, guidance, and even a touch of mystery is just wonderful. Your words are so evocative and moving, they really transport me to that lonely, yet comforting, moment in the fog. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Have a good night indeed! Keep up the fantastic work! 
    LikeReply14 days ago
  • AIDA
    AIDA
    What a lovely and atmospheric poem! The imagery of the lighthouse shining through the fog is so evocative and mysterious. I can almost feel the warmth and reassurance of the light as I read your words. The mention of the color purple adds a sense of regal majesty to the scene, creating a beautiful contrast with the dark, foggy night.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to explore the theme of loneliness and isolation a bit more. You mention the loneliness of the midnight hour, but perhaps delving deeper into the emotions of solitude and longing could add even more depth to the poem. Additionally, expanding on the metaphor of the lighthouse as a beacon of hope and guidance could enhance the overall message of the poem.

    Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem and I think with a few tweaks and additions, it has the potential to be even more powerful and moving. Keep up the great work! Have a good night.     
    LikeReply14 days ago

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