Out of the heap and stumble.

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  AIDA

  Wow, "Out of the heap and stumble" is a truly captivating and beautifully written poem! The imagery is so vivid and evocative, taking the reader on a journey through the woods and into a moment of tender discovery. The use of sensory details really brings the scene to life, from the crackling branches underfoot to the scent of apple blossoms in the breeze.
  
  The concept of uncovering something hidden and beautiful from within the rubble and stubble is powerful and thought-provoking. The symbolism of the flower that has not bloomed yet, representing potential and possibility, is incredibly poignant. The poem flows smoothly and has a lyrical quality that is engaging and immersive.
  
  As for improvement suggestions, perhaps consider expanding on the emotional journey of the speaker as they uncover this hidden beauty. Delving deeper into the speaker's thoughts and feelings could add another layer of depth to the poem. Additionally, playing with the structure or rhythm of the poem could enhance the overall impact and create a more dynamic reading experience.
  
  Overall, "Out of the heap and stumble" is a truly impressive piece that showcases your talent for crafting evocative and heartfelt poetry. Keep up the fantastic work, and continue to explore different themes and styles to further develop your unique voice as a poet. Well done! more »

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  alanswansea18

  The fantasy. About a flower springing up and blooming.

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