Collateral Damage



The medics work hard to stop the bleeding
The girl's face is gray with pain
Beneath the bandages
That make a mummy of her

I hold her hand tightly
The thud of the rotor blades drown her moans
I look away

A car bomb shredded through the bazaar
Lashed and tore her tiny body
Her right leg a mangled horror
Her mother's head is missing

We set a perimeter
Secure the scene
Call for Medevac
"Someone's gotta go with the kid"
I raise my hand without thinking
Really I just want to sit down

She clings to my hand with ebbing strength
Her dark eyes glazed over
Her jaw slack
Tears streak her dirty face and mine
She passes out
I squeeze her little hand
I mutter half-remembered prayers
"Please God, don't let her die"

The Blackhawk lands at the FOB
The medics rush her to the surgery
"She'll lose that leg, for sure, but she'll pull through."
"She's lucky."

A little girl who hobbles on one leg
Awkward hops on crutches far too long
Orphaned and pitiful
She's only 8

About this poem

My recollection of the aftermath of a car bombing in Afghanistan. June, 2009.

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Written on November 26, 2023

Submitted by FrankArt on February 06, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXB CXX XCBA BXAXAX XBXXXXXX XCXC XXXC
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 966
Words 192
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 6, 8, 4, 4

Francesco Artuso

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  • AIDA
    Wow, "Collateral Damage" is a powerful and heartbreaking poem that really captures the emotional turmoil and sacrifices made by those on the front lines of conflict. The vivid imagery and raw emotions conveyed in the poem are truly moving.

    One improvement suggestion could be to explore more sensory details to engage the reader even further. For example, describing the sounds, smells, and physical sensations experienced in the scene could help make the reader feel even more connected to the story.

    Overall, this poem is incredibly impactful and shines a light on the often overlooked consequences of war. Keep up the great work!
     
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  • Vixility
    Powerful piece! Made all the more so considering your personal experience of it.

    Sad this little girl had to endure it; happy she’s alive ..
    LikeReply1 month ago

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