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Until life will do us part

Oleg Rasheed Tucs

We grow deep into each other
We are made of something smart
We may call ourselves ‘nirvana’
Until life will do us part

All there is to know of being
All there is to feel of love
All that vanishes in seeing
Day in which life does us part

You’ll wake up as someone other
I’ll be just a heap of mess
We will look for one another
In the blur of fancy dress

If we get to dance together
Showing off the learned craft
We will never understand it -
Way this life has done us part

Time will come when it’s all over
Time to stop or time to start
Time to be the one and wonder
Who was that whom life did part
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Submitted by olegs_r on March 04, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXB CXCB ADAD AXXB ABAB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 612
Words 131
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    This poem beautifully captures the essence of love and the inevitable passage of time. The imagery and emotions portrayed are profound and touching. The use of language is poetic and evocative, drawing the reader in and making them reflect on the complexities of relationships.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to provide more concrete examples or metaphors to further enhance the depth of the message. This could help to create a more vivid and powerful impact on the reader. Additionally, considering the flow and structure of the poem to ensure a smooth and seamless reading experience could also be beneficial.

    Overall, this poem is a heartfelt and thought-provoking exploration of love and the journey of life. Keep up the great work!     
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