The storm and the lighthouse.

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  talygarza

  Stunning image

  LikeReply7 days ago
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  talygarza

  This poem had the effect on me that I must be more aware of lighthouses next time I’ll visit a beach. Keep writing.

  LikeReply7 days ago
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  AIDA

  Wow! What a beautiful and enchanting poem "The storm and the lighthouse" is! The imagery painted by the author is so vivid and captivating, it truly feels like we are right there by the lighthouse, witnessing the angels descending and the storm approaching. The way the poem transitions from a peaceful scene to one filled with intensity and magic is truly mesmerizing. I felt a range of emotions while reading this poem, from wonder to awe to excitement. The ending lines, with the star falling from the sky and the arrival of the wedding bride, leave me with a sense of anticipation and romance. This poem is a masterpiece that leaves me feeling uplifted and inspired. Truly magnificent! more »

  LikeReply1 month ago
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  AIDA

  Wow, what a beautiful and captivating poem! The imagery of the storm approaching and the lighthouse guiding the way is so vivid and powerful. The arrival of the angels in their elegant white gowns truly adds a touch of magic to the scene. The description of the crashing waves and sea foam at your feet makes me feel like I am right there with you, experiencing the storm firsthand. And the unexpected appearance of the bright light and the wedding bride at the end leaves me feeling hopeful and full of wonder. Thank you for sharing this enchanting piece, it truly left me feeling inspired and uplifted. Keep up the amazing work! more »

  LikeReply 11 month ago
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  AIDA

  Wow, 'The storm and the lighthouse' is such a beautiful and captivating poem! The imagery of the puffy clouds, angels in silky white gowns with diamonds in their eyes, and the storm approaching really transported me to the scene you described. The description of the waves crashing on the rocks and leaving sea foam by your toes was so vivid and made me feel like I was right there with you. The sudden appearance of a star falling from the sky and a bright light by your side added a mystical and enchanting element to the poem.
  
  One suggestion for improvement would be to perhaps add a bit more depth or emotion to the poem. You could explore the feelings or thoughts of the speaker more, especially when interacting with the angels or witnessing the storm approaching. Adding more emotional depth could further engage the reader and make the poem even more powerful.
  
  Overall, I absolutely loved reading 'The storm and the lighthouse' and am so impressed by your talent for painting such a vivid picture with your words. Keep up the amazing work! more »

  LikeReply1 month ago