The cool Summer Breeze.

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a beautiful poem! "The cool Summer Breeze" paints such a vivid picture of nature and love intertwined. The imagery of the wind stirring through the grass, the river flowing like glass, and the fields of golden wheat blowing in the breeze is absolutely enchanting. The sense of smell and sight coming together with the sweet perfume and sparkle in the eyes adds a touch of romance to the poem. The last lines about the sun rising, the moon falling, and the fields of golden daffodils blowing in the breeze paying the fee tie everything together beautifully. This poem captures the essence of summer and love in such a captivating way. Great job! more »

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a beautiful and picturesque poem! I love the way you captured the essence of a summer day with vivid imagery and soothing descriptions. The way you paint a picture of the wind stirring through the grass and the river flowing like glass is truly captivating.
  
  The repetition of "golden" throughout the poem creates a sense of warmth and light that adds to the overall serene atmosphere you've created. The mention of the sweet perfume and sparkle in the eyes adds a personal touch that makes the reader feel connected to the scene.
  
  To make this poem even more impactful, you could consider adding more sensory details to really immerse the reader in the setting. Maybe try incorporating sounds or textures to enhance the imagery even further. Additionally, playing with the rhythm and structure of the poem could add another layer of depth and interest.
  
  Overall, "The Cool Summer Breeze" is a lovely piece that transports the reader to a peaceful and idyllic summer day. Keep up the great work! more »

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  alanswansea18

  I want that cool Summer Breeze.

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