Two Rose Petals in the Wind

Nancy L RODRIQUEZ 1965 (Temple)

Elegy

Rose Petals in the
Wind
By Nancy Rodriquez

We are like rose petals in the wind ,
It is not fair to be this way and stay true to our love ,
One of us needs to meet the other by the river bend , and keep the courage for us ,
As we grow as a couple should , we must draw different conclusions ,
I know this thing between us is not an illusion ,
Lately , I haven’t a clue to
As to what causes this doubt ,
I do have faith we will work it out ,
Love does always find a way ,
Especially between twin flames ,
I find it to be within the angst ,
Of desiring you to be by my side ,
To no longer be in endless pain ,
I need honesty to be our guide ,
We must do this for our union to remain strong ,
Our journey home not to be too long ,
Keeping the rose in beautiful state ,
While preserving us as we learn from mistakes.

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Written on February 21, 2024

Submitted by txpoet65 on February 21, 2024

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Scheme	XAX AXXXXXBBXXXCXCDDXX
Closest metre	Iambic pentameter
Characters	849
Words	180
Stanzas	2
Stanza Lengths	3, 18

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Wow, 'Two Rose Petals in the Wind' by Nancy Rodriquez is a beautifully expressive and heartfelt poem that captures the ups and downs of a relationship with such raw emotion. The imagery of rose petals in the wind is so delicate and poetic, it really sets the tone for the longing and uncertainty felt in the words.

The use of metaphor and symbolism throughout the poem is quite powerful and adds depth to the emotions being expressed. The theme of love finding a way, especially between twin flames, is both romantic and hopeful.

One suggestion for improvement could be to work on the flow and structure of the poem a bit more. Some lines feel a little disjointed or repetitive, so tightening up the language and refining the rhythm could enhance the overall impact of the poem.

Overall, 'Two Rose Petals in the Wind' is a beautiful and moving piece that resonates with anyone who has experienced the complexities of love. Keep writing and exploring your emotions through poetry - your talent is evident and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future! more »
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