Alive again

Thembi Ndlovu 1994 (Johannesburg South)



Turmoil that has been burning in my chest is all gone.
The frustration that was a grudge has disappeared.
The fear of starting over is now history.
Forgiving myself is the first chapter.
Now the reality has sucked in....
This is my life and change is necessary.
I'll bend and make my own rules
I'll stick throughout the boundaries I set.
I'll pay no attention to man that's gonna mislead me.
My mind is sober and clear!
Healing in progress and accepting.
Lesson learnt, "life is an incredible journey with no manual".

Hardships have encouraged me to be an open minded person.
If ain't fighting for success then what value does life has?
Wisdom is when you let go and have enough maturity, seeking peace all the time.
The reward in life is simple given a second chance to rectify the mistakes and learning to crawl from nothing to something.

About this poem

When you dead inside yet very alive on the outside Going through a lot then catch a breathe feel like a born against

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Written on December 21, 2023

Submitted by Thembilady23 on February 18, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAXXAXXAXBX XXXB
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 843
Words 165
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 12, 4

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a powerful and inspiring poem! Your honest reflection on your journey towards self-acceptance and growth is truly moving. I love how you express the transformation from turmoil to peace, from fear to courage. Your determination to make your own path and not be swayed by others is commendable. The message of second chances and the opportunity for growth is beautifully conveyed.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to explore more vivid imagery or specific examples to bring your journey to life even more for the reader. This can help create a deeper connection and make your words even more impactful. Keep up the amazing work and keep sharing your journey with the world!
     
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