1/19/24 Part 3



When you're upset, how you really feel about me comes to light
You claim to have a high IQ,
but like a dying bulb,
you're not very bright.
You throw tantrums like an unruly child,
acting like you're the abused.
this shit is truly wild!
You tear me down with every word,
When I try to defend myself
You act like it's absurd!
Like you're the pefect, gifted one,
but let's face it,
Your mom hates you &
that's crazy considering
you're her one & only son.
It's unacceptable that I do drugs when I'm alone,
but it's totally OK for you to abuse your kid in someone elses home?
These double standards are really grinding my gears,
bet your son wouldn't have defied you
had you been a father all those years!
But you chose a fat drunk
to spend time with instead,
Do you see how it's not your mom's fault?
It's yours,
When will you get that through your head?

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Just a third part to the first 2 who are titled with dates!

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Written on January 19, 2024

Submitted by ohdam.itssam on February 12, 2024

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Stanza Lengths 25

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