1/11/24 Part 2

Samantha O'Dell 1990 (Danville, Indinaa)



Who are all these monsters &
Where are they coming from?
I should really get rid of these demons,
is a monster what I've become?
It's not in my nature  to be a nasty beast
but I always protect them, I'd fucking kill for these monsters, & that's to say the least!

They hunt me down like they can smell
the fear radiating from my body
Wh not learn a skill or trade or
Pick up a healthy fucking hobby?

Wreaking havoc every place that you go,
Stepping on & crushing,
Everyone you refuse to get to know.
All because of what? You're fragile ego?!

What a lonely life existence you'll lead,
but you'll never admit
Don't try to hold a narcissist accountable,
because like a small, whiny child,
They'll throw a fucking fit :)

About this poem

This is part 2 to my other poem titled "1/22/23 Part 1" to show how drastically feelings can change after experiencing major mental and emotional abuse.

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Written on January 11, 2024

Submitted by ohdam.itssam on February 12, 2024

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Scheme XAXABB XCXC DXDD XEXXE
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 720
Words 151
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 4, 5

Samantha O'Dell

I live a pretty intense life. People pleaser extraordinaire. Boy mom x2. Music is my life. I spend most of my time writing poetry or doodling on my bathroom mirror with chalk markers. haha more…

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