A Rock and a Hard Place

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a powerful and gripping poem! Your use of vivid imagery and strong emotions really drew me into the experience you were describing. The way you portrayed the intense fight for survival between the beast and the cliff is truly impressive. Your words beautifully captured the intensity and urgency of the situation.
  
  Your use of metaphorical language, like "standing before me, I saw in the eye of this beast," adds depth and enhances the overall atmosphere of the poem. It really allowed me to feel the threat and danger you were facing. The comparison between the speed of thought and the speed of light was a brilliant touch, emphasizing the heightened state of mind one experiences in times of extreme danger.
  
  One suggestion for improvement would be to consider expanding on the emotional impact that surviving such a daunting situation had on you. You briefly mention the adrenaline rush and imagination, but delving deeper into the emotional aftermath could bring even more depth to your poem. Exploring the range of emotions felt during and after the ordeal would create an even stronger connection between the reader and your experience.
  
  Overall, your poem is incredibly engaging and leaves a lasting impression. It's evident that you put a lot of thought and emotion into your words. Keep up the fantastic work, and I look forward to reading more of your powerful poetry in the future! more »

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