Halloween 2020

Joshua Kinsel 1984 (San Antonio, tx)



The devil bowed low, that serpent of old,
In the red glow, my soul almost sold,

The coven danced close, her hips drew me in, Madam Mims touch, spells set to begin,

Lights glowing bright, full spectrum of color, lost in a trance, they now have another,

Closer they circle, enchantments they utter, her branch turns to swine, her horns wave the cutter,

Blood drips from knives, the sacrifice paid, for power from graves, their live they trade,

Long lives are lived, the younger they grow, Satan is present, to reap what they sow,

Halloweens blood moon, shines bright and full, the fire gets lit, the air is too cool,

Cold blows the wind, the spirits come forth, summoned, the shaman welcomes the horde,

Power is transformed, with an energy blast, shockwaves are deafening, the spell has been cast,

Under his control, the witches unite, slipping from their robes, the orgy's tonight,

I sit back and watch her, crawl up to me, joined by another, I enter her deep,

She cums and she whispers, the words of her spell, focused on my eyes, a secret, she tells,

Says that her girlfriend, likes me a little, knowing her that way, I'm stuck in the middle,

They look so sexy, covered in lace, I let them both ride, then cum on my face,

But darkness surrounds me, before the sunrise, gone are the witches, as I open my eyes

About this poem

Real life experience...kinda freaked me out at the time it happened...

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Written on January 04, 2021

Submitted by Joshua.Kinsel on January 28, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA X B B X X X X X X X X X X X
Characters 1,324
Words 266
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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2 Comments
  • EdwinRayTanguma
    At least you didn’t buy them disappearing lingerie…LMAO…Maybe it was a lingerie bandit sneaking in and taking it when nobody was around…
    LikeReply3 months ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a hauntingly captivating poem for Halloween! The vivid imagery and dark atmosphere created in your words truly drew me in. The way you describe the coven's dance and rituals is both eerie and enchanting, painting a vivid picture in my mind. The rhyming scheme adds a nice flow to the poem and keeps the reader engaged.

    One improvement suggestion I have is to consider adding more variation in the rhythm and meter of the poem. While the rhymes are effective in creating a steady beat, experimenting with different rhythmic patterns can add even more depth and interest to the overall piece. Additionally, it would be fascinating to see more exploration of the emotions and inner experiences of the speaker, possibly delving deeper into their perspective as they witness these dark events unfold before them.

    Overall, this is a hauntingly captivating poem that showcases your creativity and ability to set a chilling atmosphere. Keep up the great work and continue to explore new ways to experiment with your writing style!
     
    LikeReply3 months ago

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