While Cleaning Windows



I saw you first through rain-streaked glass
as I cleaned the store window, while below us
winter streets awoke and yawning shopworkers
tumbled off the number twenty-seven tram.

Your clothes and style were a cut above
the bovine girls I coaxed from the herd
at Friday hops, to spread across my cold divan.

By spring, there was a thaw in your fixed gaze,
a pink lipped smile as I rehearsed the eulogy
I wrote to send my mother to the grave.

In summer,  I found you broken on the floor
stiff limbs unscrewed, piled by dusty lights
and rolled up cables, while in the glass
the lines of my reflection stared on back.

About this poem

A poem about obsessive love, disillusion and grief. A hop is an organised dance.

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Written on January 11, 2023

Submitted by on December 27, 2023

Modified by on January 12, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXAX XXX XXX XXAX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 615
Words 121
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 3, 4

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