Concrete Solitude



In the heart of the city's ceaseless beat,
Where neon lights paint the crowded street,
Amid the towers that touch the sky,
I find a solitude that makes me sigh.

The labyrinth of alleys, a shadowed maze,
Echoes with footsteps, lost in a daze,
Concrete giants, reaching for the stars,
Yet within, the loneliness quietly scars.

Faces pass, each one a fleeting glance,
 In this urban dance, a solitary trance,
Shadows on pavement, a silent parade,
A city's heartbeat, a symphony of charade.

The neon signs hum a lonely song,
As crowded sidewalks weave along,
Reflections in windows, distant stares,
 A silent plea for someone who cares.

Isolation wears a crowded disguise,
In the city's pulse, where loneliness lies,
Among the masses, I find my own space,
A concrete solitude, a crowded embrace.

The city whispers tales untold,
Of dreams crushed and stories unfold,
Yet in the solitude of this urban scene,
I find solace in the spaces in between.

Concrete solitude, a paradoxical theme,
In the heart of the city, a solitary dream,
 A reflection of faces, lost and found,
In the city's embrace, silence resounds

About this poem

My son wrote this poem for school, I was moved by it and would like to enter it for him.

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Written on December 13, 2023

Submitted by Tony.visotto on December 14, 2023

1:07 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH IIJJ KKLL MMXC
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,132
Words 220
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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2 Comments
  • Philipo
    Fine work from him. Sending my congratulations.
    LikeReply3 months ago
  • Giselavigil
    Great writing! It brought me back to when
    I used to drive into Manhattan, sit in Central Park alone. It was the most peaceful place for me amidst the hustle of the city.
    LikeReply3 months ago

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