Not Okey



In a land where sorrows dwell,
Hearts lament, stories tell,
Somalia's name, scars untold,
Echoes pain, stories unfold.

Recall brings back the aching cry,
Mothers weep, tears defy,
Children starve, innocence lost,
Heroes fall, freedom's cost.

Rich thrive, the poor they sway,
Leaders feast, while hope fades away,
Youth lost in life's tangled maze,
Dreams crushed in the swirling craze.

Hodan Nalayeh, a radiant beam,
Preached for peace, a hopeful dream,
Elman's kin, aiming to mend,
Teaching unity, wounds to tend.

Yet cruelty struck in cruellest way,
Their voices hushed, in the fray,
"Not okay," the sorrow seeps,
Losing those who dared to leap.

I dwell where peace finds its place,
Comfort embraced, a different space,
But thoughts take flight, soar and roam,
Back to Somalia, aching home.

Seeing smiles on young faces there,
Hoping for change, a fervent prayer,
But hope fades in discord's sound,
Chaos whispers, trembling ground.

Each time progress dares to shine,
Tragedy strikes, dims hope's line,
"Not okay," my heart does cry,
Can't turn away, can't deny.

Within, a battle, this inner fight,
To forget or stay, to set things right,
Somalia, my heart won't bend,
To witness pain, I can't pretend.

It's not okay, this pain I see,
The wounds that linger, refuse to flee,
Yet in the shadows, a spark ignites,
A yearning for change, beyond the heights.

In whispers and cries, strength abounds,
To strive, to heal, where hope resounds,
For 'not okay' sparks the will,
To mend, to change, to stand, be still.

May Somalia's tale find a new course,
Embrace peace, let wounds find remorse,
In the struggle, in voices strong,
Hope for change, however long.

About this poem

The poem reflects on the struggles and hardships faced by Somalia as a country. It touches on various aspects of the nation's difficulties, such as the suffering of mothers and children, the loss of heroes, the disparity between the rich and poor, and the impact of political turmoil.

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Written on December 06, 2023

Submitted by Ajimale00 on December 06, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCXX DDEE FFGG DDXX HHII JJKK LLCC MMGG NNOO XEPP QQRR
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,665
Words 336
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Nuxur shiekh

Sarah Ahmed grew up in Somalia, where she felt both the sadness and strength of her country deeply. She loved writing poems from a young age, using words to share the feelings she had about the difficult things happening around her. Sarah's poems talked about the hard times in Somalia, like when families were sad or when people wanted peace but couldn't find it. She was inspired by brave people like Hodan Nalayeh and Elman's family, who worked hard for peace even though they faced tough times. Even though Sarah lived in different places, she always carried Somalia in her heart. Her poems showed both the comfort of living somewhere peaceful and the memories of Somalia's struggles. She wanted her poems to make people think about how important it is to come together and heal, even when things are hard. more…

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