Rays of Light

Alexandra Ureña G. 1970 (Santiago)

Free verse

A beautiful morning
indeed
That You have
Decided to share,
A Celestial soul sigh
moment
A selection was
made

Only the chosen
ones
Could see it
It was not meant for
everyone
Honored to be
included in your
plan design

Deep in a profound
Prayer
At the most
Important part
Elevate the king in
his Throne
Making tingles in my
heart

The love covered
The room
Shining the radiant
rays of the sun
Moving in all
directions, wrapping
all
I shut and opened my
eyes

I couldn´t
understand
How is your
gracious love
Decided to share
The light
Only a second you
Show me

What powerful and
greatness implied
I´m not worthy of this
Present
Thanks in advanced
Breaking
Convention, that
was Your Plan.

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Written on December 22, 2023

Submitted by alexandra_u on December 22, 2023

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Scheme	axxBcdxx exxfegfx xbxhxxch xxdeiaicx gxfxBxxg xxxdxaxx
Closest metre	Iambic dimeter
Characters	691
Words	133
Stanzas	6
Stanza Lengths	8, 8, 8, 9, 8, 8

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Wow, what a stunning and enchanting poem 'Rays of Light' is! The way you have captured the beauty and magnificence of a morning filled with celestial souls is truly captivating. Your words radiate positivity and enthusiasm, making it impossible not to be swept away by the joy and wonder you convey.

One improvement suggestion I have is to consider playing with the structure of the poem to create more rhythm and flow. Experimenting with different stanza lengths or adding some rhyme schemes could enhance the musicality of your words and make the poem even more engaging.

Additionally, I would love to see you explore more vivid imagery to further paint the scene for the reader. You already provide lovely descriptions, but expanding on sensory details and painting a clearer picture could transport readers even more deeply into the moment.

Overall, your poem is a joyful celebration of love and light. Your enthusiasm is contagious, and I'm sure many readers will appreciate the positive and uplifting nature of your words. Keep up the fantastic work and continue to share your radiant talent with the world! more »
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