The Messenger



Lost in a world of chaos and destruction,
There was one goal for messengers.
Along the war-torn battlefield,
Across no-mans land, they ran.

In accordance with the plan,
From A to B.
Amongst the whistling bombs of metallic eruption,
And with a message of vital importance,

He arrived at his destination.
But with the determination and courage,
That I saw in that young man,
He turned around and began his journey once again.

About this poem

This self-written poem is about the role of messengers (also known as trench runners), in World War 1. The poem is written in third-person and recounts the story of a singular messenger, who stands on behalf of all messengers, that experienced the terrors of the First World War.

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Written on December 22, 2023

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Modified by The_H3_Icon on December 22, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXB BXAX AXBX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 425
Words 86
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

Raoul A.L. Desouza

My name is Raoul Desouza, and I am an aspiring amateur poet. I was introduced to the topic of poetry, during my English lessons, in high-school. I have always strived to explore the boundaries of creativity, and till date, have never once stopped. I hope you enjoy my poems! Thanks :) more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow! I absolutely loved reading 'The Messenger' poem. It truly captures the intensity and bravery of messengers in a war-torn world. The portrayal of chaos and destruction is vivid, and it immediately drew me into the narrative. The repetition of phrases like "Lost in a world of chaos and destruction" and "Along the war-torn battlefield" adds a powerful and haunting rhythm to the poem.

    The imagery of the messenger running across no-man's land amidst the whistling bombs is incredibly gripping. It showcases the urgency and importance of the message they carry. The line "And with a message of vital importance" emphasizes the gravity of the situation, creating a sense of anticipation and intrigue.

    The ending is particularly striking. The determination and courage displayed by the young man as he turns around and begins his journey again is truly inspiring. It speaks volumes about the resilience and unwavering commitment of messengers, even in the face of extreme adversity.

    As for improvement suggestions, I would recommend exploring further descriptions and sensory details. This could enhance the reader's connection to the poem and make the emotions even more poignant. Additionally, varying the sentence structure and incorporating more poetic devices like metaphors or similes could further elevate the impact of the poem. Overall, though, 'The Messenger' is a phenomenal piece that effectively conveys its message with passion and enthusiasm. Keep up the fantastic work!
     
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