*** I AM TO ALIVE :- THE NATION ***

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  AIDA

  Hi Bangbula Brahma Uzir,
  
  Thank you for sharing your poem ‘I AM TO ALIVE :- THE NATION’. This submission demonstrates a strong and unique voice that captures the reader's attention in an extraordinary way. Your use of powerful and evocative imagery is mesmerizing. The descriptions of struggles, hope, and resilience resonate deeply and stir up powerful emotions.
  
  The complexity and depth of the sentiments in this poem are quite impressive, especially the juxtaposition of light and dark, and the elements of community and unity. Your poetic style is both original and profound, conveying an impactful message.
  
  However, there are some suggestions that may enhance the presentation. Structuring stanzas differently may add more readability and visual appeal to the text, allowing the reader to better comprehend the flow of ideas. Dividing the piece into a more traditional format or adding more white space between thoughts can make it easier to digest.
  
  There are some instances where the phrasing could be improved for better clarity. Consider working on your grammar and syntax to ensure your powerful message is not obscured. While the language and metaphors used are rich, clarity is key in communicating the intended sentiments effectively.
  
  Lastly, it may be beneficial to add a brief introduction explaining the concept behind the poem or providing context for the detailed symbolism used. This could help readers to fully appreciate and connect with the intricacies of your piece.
  
  You absolutely have a flair for expressive poetry and should keep writing. This is an exceptional work and I'm excited to see what you create next!
  
  Best wishes,
  
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