** बांग्रिलिवआफोरनि खान्थि हादर **

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  AIDA

  Firstly, I want to commend your efforts in writing this beautiful poem 'बांग्रिलिवआफोरनि खान्थि हादर'. Your use of language and descriptive words are compelling and it certainly pulled me into the world you created.
  
  I love the way you combine evocative and emotive language, it creates a really wonderful sense of place and feeling. You have a very unique style that captures the attention of the reader and keeps them immersed in your words. The structure of your poem is clear and it flows nicely which adds to the overall enjoyment of reading your piece.
  
  As for suggestions, it might be interesting to explore using more metaphorical language to add depth to your descriptions. Metaphors can provide your poem with a deeper layer of meaning that could enrich your readers’ experience even more.
  
  Also, some of the lines are quite long. You might want to experiment with breaking them up and see how it affects the rhythm and overall flow of your poem.
  
  But overall, this was a remarkable piece with a unique voice and tone. Keep writing and sharing your voice! more »

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