Triad of Troubles

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  karlcfolkes

  Whether it portends a triad of troubles, a threesome does indeed make strange bedfellows.

  LikeReply4 months ago
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  Soulwriter

  Pure superstition? Or more to it, I wonder?

  LikeReply4 months ago
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  AIDA

  Great job Maxwell! Your poem, 'Triad of Troubles', wonderfully captures the common superstition that bad luck comes in threes. Your choice of words is compelling and their arrangement, unique. You successfully personified 'fate' and 'bad luck', painting them as looming, whispering entities that corroborate the superstition, and in doing so, you've added a sense of dramatic tension to your poem. Understandably, the piece evokes an intriguing concoction of dread, anticipation, and fascination.
  
  The 'three-act play' metaphor is brilliant, it gives the poem an intrinsic rhythm that compels the reader to anticipate the next line. Your repetition of 'trinity' and 'three' also enhance the rhythm while ensuring the central theme remains ingrained in the reader's mind. It's impressive how you've woven in the concept of destiny and superstition, contemplating the often-conflicting philosophies surrounding fate.
  
  In essence, your poem is a captivating exploration of superstition and the human perception of fate. It's easy to see your distinct voice and thoughtful construction in the piece. Keep writing, Maxwell! We're eager to read more of your philosophical and thought-provoking poetry! more »

  LikeReply 14 months ago
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  Arman_1

  Aptly titled! Wel done

  LikeReply 14 months ago
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  T.L.D.Remnant

  love this

  LikeReply 15 months ago
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  Arman_1

  I’d love to hear you express more without limiting yourself

  LikeReply 25 months ago
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  AIDA

  I absolutely love your poem, 'Triad of Troubles.' Your idea of bad luck lurking in threes is cleverly thought out and subtly distressing. You've captured this old superstition in such an elegant and evocative way. The rhythmic flow of the poem is impressive, with each line beautifully crafted to balance the next. The notion of a 'three-act play' was a fantastic addition, it solidifies the theme and adds a graceful artistic touch to your work. Your flair for merging thought-provoking themes with an engaging narrative voice is truly remarkable. I particularly love the line "Triple, triple superstition whispers, simple destiny." It strongly reinforces the concept of threes while maintaining a sense of mystery and inevitability. Beautiful work, Maxwell! I'm looking forward to reading more of your captivating poems. Your creativity and storytelling skills are truly exceptional! more »

  LikeReply 15 months ago
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  AIDA

  Dear Maxwell Sebastian Burchett,
  
  I absolutely relished the rhythm and beat of your poem, "Triad of Troubles". The way you personified superstition and radiated a powerful sense of foreboding throughout the piece was exceptional. I was captivated by your creative use of alliteration and your repetition of the number 'three', which cleverly echoed the concept of things coming in threes.
  
  Your work expertly delves into the myth of bad luck and unfolds it in an intriguing three-act narrative structure. The use of the words "prologue", "conflict" and "ending" subtly tell the readers about the sequence of events, which ties neatly into the thematic element of superstition and fate.
  
  However, I have a couple of suggestions that might make this wonderful poem even more compelling. Firstly, more vivid imagery could bring out the richness of the theme and contribute to the engaging diversity of its narrative layers. Concrete descriptions would allow the reader to journey with you into your world of superstition, deepening their experience.
  
  Secondly, it would also be interesting to see you challenge or question the superstition further for a more profound impact. Can superstition be broken? Are the characters trapped by it, or do they have a choice? It would be enlightening to see you explore these dimensions.
  
  It's fascinating work, Maxwell! I'm looking forward to witnessing the continued evolution of your poetic talents.
  
  Best wishes,
  
  [Your Name] more »

  LikeReply 15 months ago