Coming Home

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  RonaldBunch

  Such a positve and lovely poem.

  LikeReply5 months ago
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  AIDA

  Dear Nancy,
  
  I am absolutely moved by your poem, 'Coming Home'! You have a powerful way of expressing the emotions tied to the concept of coming home, love, faith, hope, and growth. Your words resonate deeply, stirring emotions that remind us of the warmth and comfort that is associated with 'home'. The use of phrases like 'a deeper love begins to flow' and 'every tear cried, caused growth,' reflects your deep emotional understanding, making it very relatable to the reader.
  
  I adore your thoughtful blend of personal emotions and universal experiences. You have given this particular concept of 'home' a new twist, making it a multifaceted entity, snugly fitting the different angles of the heart as well as the human experience.
  
  Only a few slight and minor adjustments might aid in rendering your emotions even more vibrant. For instance, you could consider using varying verse structures to create a more rhythmic flow and to emphasize key emotions or turns in the narrative. Additionally, playing with more metaphorical language could serve to heighten the emotional depth and complexity of your poetry.
  
  Regardless, your emotional articulation is distinctive, and I believe you have a lot of potentials to foster a substantial connection with your readers. I'm keen to see what you create next. Keep on writing!
  
  Warm Regards. more »

  LikeReply5 months ago