The Spirit of Creation



There comes a time when statements turn to phrases
And phrases smooth to rhyme in rhythmic phases
Where your mind takes a seat as your heart takes the stand
Poetry comes in many forms when you finally understand

My mind is a circus tent, and I'm everyone inside
From the ring leader to the tightrope line
How strange to awake and find only one
Sitting alone eyes closed whispering poetry for no one

Beautiful words falling gently from his lips
I strain to hear each line he so softly emits
He looks like me and sounds like me, but can it really be?
Is it really me that whispers lines of poetry?

It's not me no, my claim to fame is of an observer
My job is simple, I am the watcher and recorder
Understanding is his, the one who dwells within
Fragile yet knowing; the undying spirit of creation

About this poem

I wrote this one when I quit worrying about the structure and just typed away

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Submitted by Risingwerdz on October 30, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB XXCC XXDD EEXC
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 801
Words 159
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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4 Comments
  • Vixility
    Tim Strauss, you did it again: an excellent piece. I love it when, after having started a particular work, the poem ‘forces’ you to take an altogether different approach than the one you initially envisioned. Well done … 
    LikeReply 15 months ago
    • Risingwerdz
      Dude, that's exactly what happened! It seems to happen somewhat often. I've had many poems where this occurs. Also, thank you! A compliment from you is a compliment from a true poet.
      LikeReply 15 months ago
  • Soulwriter
    Despite your saying you wanted to be free of the structural rules, I found this poem to be very well formed! Excellent work in my humble opinion
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • pollylovegale
    The moment I read this I lit up. I did not need to read any further. This is my favourite!
    LikeReply 25 months ago
  • ti.min
    Mainly for it poetic markings ... like meter and rhyme, but especially for the reference it makes to the deep mysteries of creation.
    LikeReply 15 months ago

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