Hindsight



This old house is getting cluttered
And the walls are getting scarred
As I wander through life’s living room
Of broken Mason jars
And I can’t afford the rent this month
I drank it in the bar
Ain’t it funny how you see things twenty-twenty

Ain’t it funny how you see things twenty-twenty
When you’ve gargled every dollar, dime and penny
Then the ev’nin’ whistle blows
And you leave in dirty clothes
Ain’t it funny how you see things twenty-twenty

Sometimes I see a lover’s moon
But most times I see stars
And with bloody feet I curse the room
Of broken Mason jars
But swear that there’s a pot o’ gold
Across next valley’s ridge
While singing silly nursery rhymes
And torching one more bridge

Ain’t it funny how you see things twenty twenty
When you’ve squandered your last dollar, dime and penny
Sittin’ on a fence that’s splintered
Wishing for a soul-food dinner
Ain’t it funny how you see things twenty-twenty

You can always tell a gambler by his shoes
And he always tips the shine-boy, win or lose
With his friends right by his side
‘til they drink his bottle dry
Then the band starts playin’ Robert Johnson blues

Ain’t it funny how you see things twenty twenty
When you’ve wagered your last dollar, dime and penny
Put that money on the table
Lady Luck is just a fable
Ain’t it funny how you see things twenty-twenty

I’ve been raising bees to try and make some money
But the rent is due until you fetch the honey
Gettin’ stung, but gettin’ paid
Spin the chamber, find the maid
Twenty-twenty
Gun is empty
Ain’t it funny

About this poem

An unexamined life is ignorant and ignorance is bliss. This poem reflects on the tuition of life, some autobiographical, but mostly a hodgepodge of faction as one at the losing end might feel it. Note: I have previously published a version of this work here on Poetry.com to gauge interest under the working title Twenty Twenty.

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Written on August 16, 2020

Submitted by GregLanier on October 27, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme axbCxxD DdxxD xcbCxexe DdaxD ffxxf DdggD ddhhddd
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,579
Words 285
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 7, 5, 8, 5, 5, 5, 7

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1 Comment
  • Finding.faloola
    I loved ‘watching’ this piece as it played out. So relatable in laugh at my own pain kinda way.
    LikeReply5 months ago
    • GregLanier
      Thanks Finding. I hope your pain will find a way to express itself in a positive way to help others.

      You will find that us few, we precious few relative to the overall population, are all tortured souls. Very, very few wake up at 5 and say, “I want to be a poet!” We write because our tortured souls can’t NOT write about it. Some act…some sing…some write novels…some become politicians…but a few of us write poetry. You are among friends.

      Trust me, I’ve been less uncomfortable baring my soul in an AA meeting. But I find…the more that I share…the more I find kindred spirits.

      Share more. We will critic, but we will ALL applaud the effort. We all write stuff that’s iffy and expect the slings and arrows…but you will never be disrespected. Because you are part of a unique community of misfits that share a common bond with what we feel as God that no one who doesn’t have “it” will ever know.
       
      LikeReply4 months ago

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