Can Someone Tell Me Please



What is going on in this World
Could someone PLEASE explain

Politely I ask~ polite and respectful~ how I was raised

Hate hate~ Evil evil~ killing all the innocent
That is all I see and hear

Politely I ask~ what world am I in~ not a world of peace

An eye for an eye~.   A tooth for a tooth
Some Evil game of murder~ Is that what they play?

Politely I ask~ Has someone opened a portal to hell

Justifying Evil with Evil~ unheard of from Gods people
What has happened to all of truths from God

Politely I say ~” All stand up and Pray”

Speak your voices loudly with peacefulness TODAY
“STOP STOP EVIL CRAZY ONES” for Good  outnumbers Evil

Politely I demand~ “Stop committing EviL” Speak voices loud

For anyone who commits evil or funds it to continue
Will easily be found
Holding guns with evil blood dripping from their hands

PLEASE GOD SAVE ALL THE INNOCENT PEOPLE

About this poem

This world has gone crazy in my opinion . I do not understand

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Written on October 31, 2023

Submitted by Caliconine on October 31, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XX X XX X XA X BX A AB X XXX B
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 885
Words 174
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 3, 1

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1 Comment
  • karlcfolkes
    Here’s speaking truth to power. There’s power in this message; and even more so, courage. Thank you for being a voice of conscience to the world.
    LikeReply5 months ago
    • Caliconine
      with you Brother…… Always courage to speak God’s Truth
      LikeReply5 months ago

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