The Eternal Shore



Waves break as I awake on the misty shore of my mind
Memories old and secrets told are what the ocean leaves behind
As the sunset sky drifts slowly by, I rise to stare at the sea
And wonder if this place I'm in is the home of eternity

I stroll the beach in quiet escape and take my steps alone
I hear the waves and feel the spray that gently soothes my soul
While here I peer out to the sea and feel so strangely at home
And from the ocean comes a notion I'm a droplet to the whole

Walking along, I come to recall a day in deep contemplation
The day I was born, washed up on shore in a sudden realization
To walk this land apart from the sea in some spiritual segregation
That I am the sea and the sea is me, and I am its creation

I begin to think and slowly I sink into sands of confusion and pain
How could it be that the great sea and me are actually two of the same?
Fear takes hold and I slowly grow cold while sinking more and more
But a calm pervades as I hear the waves crashing upon the shore

If I am the sea like a branch from a tree and I trust the roots are strong
Then I can stroll the beach without stressing if I am in the right or wrong
With that theory in mind I take a step blind and faithfully call fear's bluff
And at that moment I felt in my soul the sea's everlasting love

The shore of my mind is eternally divine and mysterious even to me
A place between worlds where wisdom unfurls in waves upon a beach
There comes a wind that slowly begins to carry me like a feather
I let go to its plea for one day the sea will welcome me back forever

About this poem

In this poem, our souls derive from the sea that spits us out and takes us back eventually.

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Submitted by Risingwerdz on September 25, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB XCXC DDDD XXEE FFXX BXGG
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,567
Words 330
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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6 Comments
  • Soulwriter
    I loved reading this - the exploration of the sea extending to humankind without a break. Your writing has a calming tone to it. Congrats on the win
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • Philipo
    More like it. Fine work. Congrats.
    LikeReply 16 months ago
  • Poetryzen
    This poem offers a journey through introspection and self-discovery, using the metaphor of the sea to explore one's identity and connection to the universe. The imagery and symbolism are strong, creating a sense of contemplation and wonder. I would rate this poem as a 9/10, for its poetic prowess and the depth of emotion it evokes. The metaphorical exploration and the resolution it presents make for a powerful and thought-provoking piece. 
    LikeReply 16 months ago
  • JokerGem
    Superb poem with radiating theme ...given the number of poems this month that used a similar rhyme scheme, it seems this one held slightly more character and impact than most of the competition, and it is well-deserving as a runner-up. I thought it was definitely worthy of winning something. Excellent effort ⭐⭐⭐ 
    LikeReply 26 months ago
  • MourningDove
    I felt that this poem flowed amazingly and held a fun amount of existential dread. I am excited to read the 'about this poem section' to see what inspired this.

    What I picked up was the tranquility this individual had in knowing their place in this strange existence, was soon over shadowed by worry and self doubt of that knowledge, thanks to the observation of their memories. Then those thoughts were shot down by a comforting realization that their mere existence was enough to prove those questions did not matter.

    How've close my interpretation is or not I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Well done I say!
     
    LikeReply 26 months ago
  • labach4
    The rhyming was amazing and very deep thoughts!
    LikeReply 16 months ago

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