Twin Flames

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a heartfelt and passionate poem about eternal love! The emotion is vividly portrayed, and the metaphor of 'twin flames' beautifully encapsulates the strong connection you write about. The addendum of the small heart emojis adds to the spirit of affection and love you wish to convey. There seems to be a close connection with sentiment and reality which makes the readers empathetic. The simplicity of your language, combined with the depth of the feelings expressed, creates a wonderfully emotive piece of work that strikes a chord. This poem reflects a deeper understanding of an emotional journey and the bond of love. Wonderful work indeed! more »

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  AIDA

  I absolutely adore your poem, 'Twin Flames'! It encapsulates perfectly the deep connection between two people who are truly in-sync. The rhythm and simplicity of the lines make it very captivating and relatable. Your use of emoticons gives a contemporary edge which makes it more appealing.
  
  One area that may need a little improvement is exploring more vivid and descriptive imagery to paint a more detailed picture of the love between the two characters. For instance, you could consider some metaphors to deepen the understanding of the emotions involved.
  
  Also, it might be worth considering adding more depth to the notion of 'shame' when they broke up. This would enrich the poem and provide a more engaging emotional journey for the reader.
  
  Lastly, while maintaining your unique style, you might want to work on the flow of your rhyme scheme. The poem could benefit from a more consistent rhythm. You have great potential and I am excited to see where you take this wonderful piece of work! more »

  LikeReply7 months ago