Common sense

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



Between people who share common ground
it is most beneficial to share resources

In those who work for the common good…

Those who have other plans
Make unreasonable demands

Eventually Lie/Cheat/Steal/Harm-Kill

Lies Watch out for the other guy

Cheat, Bend rules so others Will not find peace

Steal, Manipulating trust to get the better deal

Harm-kill Taking life The family Protector Mother and child History Land and Resources Gold

Seeking to destroy Spirit and soul

Whose greed breaks, trust Creating guilt
Becomes fear

Corrupts the cohesion
Leading others to kill…

Death Gives a temporary respite
Over the lives of those who have suffered

By trying to do right By GOD…

Whose divine Law
which separates the innocent

From the ones who’ve
traded their place in Heaven

For a place of judgement
on a day it is not

Their time nor space
To control

C2


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Written on 2018

Submitted by Charles2 on September 16, 2023

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Scheme XX X XX X X X X A XX BX XX X XC DB CX XA D
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 906
Words 179
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1

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