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Time portal

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)

Every star in heaven in chorus
lays a path before us

Perfect passing moments
following golden sunsets

Creating subdued seduction

Bathing our minds eye
with a magnificent glow

A show which calls
the reflecting golden sun

In a ghostly sheen
calling forth the stars

As if from a dream shared
with ancestral souls

United eyes

focused upwards
into the skies

Lovingly surrendered
to prayers for better lives

If not for better chances

as soular winds sing
All across eternity…

time for all dreams

to rise

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Written on 2005

Submitted by Charles2 on September 16, 2023

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Scheme AA XX B XX XB XX XX XX XX X XX X X
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 555
Words 120
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 1
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