Tears at the Extreme



Tears for eyes of mine, a stark divide,
World’y wealth, end-to-end doth ride.
Opulent excess to modest toil,
Hand-to-mouth wage worker navigates life's coil.

At one extreme, riches glisten and gleam,
Lives of luxury, like a distant dream.
Yachts and mansions and maids, a realm of excess,
Where gold and spices are abundant, worries differ’nt yet no less.

But the meager worker’s hand,
Toils for a living, through every demand.
Tears for eyes of mine, a stark divide.
From dawn till dusk, with sweat on the brow,
Chasing impossible dreams, through a plough.

For the measly worker, life's scale is real,
Suspending dreams with daily appeal.
Material wealth, an inconstant thing,
Measured by joy, not just bling-bling.

The extremes may cast a long, vast divide,
Yet each life's worth flows like a tide.
Tears for eyes of mine, a stark divide.
For in the midst of it all, we find,
Man’s cruel common thread that's entwined.

World’y wealth, it comes and it goes,
Yet the laborer’s spirit still glows.
Tears for eyes of mine, a stark divide.
Through highs and lows, they find their way,
In the summons of life, where they sway.
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Submitted by manik.86465 on September 07, 2023

Modified by manik.86465 on September 10, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Aabb ccdd eeAff gghh aaAii jjAkk
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,139
Words 224
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 4, 5, 5

Mani S. Kavuru

Words and writing have always interested me, but the transition now is from scientific writing (which is based on logic and the rational) to a more emotive, lyrical form. At present this remains an experiment to see if I can strike the right tone, elicit a desired effect, etc. Full disclosure: I have been utilizing chatGPT as an "assistant"; I provide the prompts, edit extensively, yet the structure is provided by my assistant. I take full responsibility for the end result. Not that dissimilar to work on a scientific project in the lab, etc. more…

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